WhisperWind's (aeria) Reviews

I love this piece! I've worked at length with the elderly and your viewpoint is so truthful. I am, however, taking your comma card away. Easy on the commas! Lol. Keep it up. 5/5.

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#4818827

Review of My Teacher, My Friend

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Great flow and very moving. Teachers deserve recognition. Keep it up.

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#4818825

Review of A Parent Is Guide

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Incredible.

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#4818824

Review of The Missing Souls of Writing.com

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I love the searing emotional pain that glides through each line and sweeps my heart across the pages of memory.

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#4818821

Review of Homefires (If You Ever Lived In Hell)

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Quite well written and so compelling. Thank you.

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#4695919

Review of Love

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (5.0)

i love how you separated the word forgiving! it opens up so many doors into the insight of love and what love and forgiveness is capable of.

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#4642688

Review of I hate Mosquitoes

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

I hate them too. Welcome to writer!

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#4642610

Review of Owl Cofe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Good job, keep writing!

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#4642605

Review of My Charity Pumpkin Head

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (5.0)

this pumpkin brightened my day. ty

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#4642604

Review of January 1 2022

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

YOU GOT THIS!!!!!!!!!!

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#4642602

Review of Coffee Love W/C 259

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (4.0)

well done. great use of imagery. i love coffee too!

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#4642601

Review of The Real Cinderella

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (2.5)

very interesting. i like your vivid imagery. keep writing!

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#4642593

Review of Serial Ouija

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I like this. It is short and breaks your neck at the end. I want to know more!

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#4642591

Review of Pride and Playfulness

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I love this! It's really creative and so true.

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#4642583

Review of Harvesting the Moon

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (4.5)

my favorite of your free verse. great ebb and flow.

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#4565959

Review of Spidey prays for her Mom

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi spidey
I am many years late in reading and responding, but I hope today finds you and your mother well.

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#4565956

Review of Seeking Oneself

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I really connect with what you say. People should strive to be kind and understanding, not judgmental and cruel. It's a fine line. Well written!

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#4565952

Review of Yesterday

Review by WhisperWind

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A lovely and well written piece. I feel the loss.