This is a wonderful poem, thoughtful subject. The way you have written your poem is excellent. You do not over stress your topic, the diversity of the vocabulary is wonderful, and the subtle rhyming scheme tops it off. I always have trouble keeping a steady beat throughout my poems, but you did an amazing job. The whole poem flows very nicely, and is a pleasure to read.
Keep up the good work!
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