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Rated: E | (3.5)
That's good but what's the central idea?
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's simple and relaxing. The way you have pictured is awesome. However, rhyming can be improved but honestly I think it's better not to because the flow and beauty is in the way it is. Keep shinning and keep writing.
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