Very interesting story. Im still kinda confused on the plot of the story and what exactly is going on but its still a very good piece of writing. This writing should defiently have a sequel that explains more about the characters and of course the plot. Keep writing!!!
This a funny piece of writing that i couldnt keep my eyes off of. There is no boring scenes or anything dull about it. Keep writing!! I want to see more!!!!
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