Wow. You had me hook, line, and sinker through the whole tale. I laughed every time he hated on the sultan. I don't know, but it was hilarious. "I will do nothing in the name of the sultan" than he rushes into battle. That was awesome.
I really like the Arabian nights so I really enjoyed this as well. I didn't see the 'roughly' too much. I thought it went exactly with the theme.
I do feel sorry for Zailiman. I'm sure we all make that mistake at times, but hopefully we catch ourselves before we get our heads chopped off and do the right thing.
Lol. You know just where to leave off. More. Give me more! Zombie walk toward the full chapter, awaiting delicious meal.
I really like her Maddy. She's awesome. I like your voice or her voice, I should say, as she lives through these few scenes. I can see that you really love to write. Hee hee, you taught me a lot about this genre too. I could pick out which words went perfectly with suspense and which ones with fantasy. I love words. Words, Words, Words, Words, Words. Lol, your story made me giddy.
I hope you will like the novel I am positing soon too. It's also got a touch of fantasy, but it's a romance.
The item I couldn't access was the actual first chapter, but I'll check that in a moment.
*Good humored laughter* I don't get it!!!!! Lol. I don't get it!!!!! Did she sock it to him, did she finally write for herself. I"m laughing because I can't get the picture of her laying back in her chair with a triumphant look on her face out of my mind. It's so funny. Does she like him? I'm romantic like that. I think everyone's got a crush on everyone, lol.
In all seriousness, this was a very entertaining read. I tried to write once about being frustrated as a writer and I couldn't, but you do it much justice. I stayed with her the entire time and I saw the whole scene so clearly through her mind. I laughed a lot too.
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing. P.S. The not getting it is entirely me.
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