I really like the feel of this poem. It gives me a very peaceful calm feeling and a great picture in my head of just sitting, watching the world move around you. Very nice write.
Well done. I like the descriptions and imagery. Especially the line about frothed mouths and also the line about civilized tea. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!
I really like this poem especially the last stanza. The brevity of each sentence is very potent and I like that it drives it's meaning home. I also like the cold feel I get from the short, sharp wording and I think you did well in the writing. Well done.
I really enjoyed this! I know exactly what you mean by trusting a GPS when it doesn't seem to make sense. My GPS lies to me regularly yet for a while I gave in and continued a relationship based on trust however in the end I paid the price for being so foolish. Thank you for voicing how I feel toward my GPS although you may have been more polite than I.
I am just now beginning the starting phases of writing my first novel and I have been reading as much as I can on the subject from many different sources and I find your advice to be very helpful. You bring up several interesting points and I think your points will help me approach this project more effectively. I was wondering when you are writing a novel and you are working on the rough draft do you write chapter by chapter and edit/polish after each chapter is complete or do you write to get the plot on paper and then go back and edit and fill in the gaps? Again great work and thanks for posting such helpful information!!
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