I like it. But the misspelled words made me a little bit confusion on the meaning. About their description, I am confused if what are they really look like. It is not included if the angels can hide their wings, and the devils, do they have a horn at their heads. How can they hide their powers and their identity? And why the demon father was there? Did their mother accept the demon father? Why did the angels are there too, if it is only the demon father was there and no angel father? I think it needs more description and explanation. Maybe, it needs more flashback. I hope that I help you. I'm sorry if I ask many questions, it was natural for me, if have something that I don't understand.
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