Superb! The imagery is great! I can picture each scene vividly through the words you chose to describe each encounter. The rhyme and rhythm are very good. When you come up with a name for it, I'm sure it will be as wonderful as your writing!
Keep up the good work, Megan...and write on!
Luv,
Alex
Now, that's how I spell relief! This is very good and describes the exact feeling when you're holding your breath. I like the feeling I get when reading it.
Keep up the grand work! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Take care...and WRITE ON!!
Luv,
Alex
That is exactly how I felt when I imagined meeting my Prince Charming...and I DID! Wow! I really like your poem. It depicts the yearnings so vividly.
Keep up the great work!...and WRITE ON!!
Luv,
Alex
Bravo! Cheers! and Yahoos!! This is excellent. An education means to be well-versed in LIFE...in real time. Leaning to read and write is important...and learning to THINK is more! I LOVE this and totally agree!
Keep it up. I'm adding you to my favorite authors and plan to follow you for a while!! (smiles)
Luv,
Alex
I like beer but could never have thought of a poem to reflect my affection and appreciation like this one. Cute...and very dramatic! I like it...'cause I'm dramatic myself. Now, you need to create an ode to pretzels! (smiles)
Write on, Kelso!! You're unique!!!
Luv,
Alex
Dynamic!! I think this is SO deep and thought-provoking! She represents that which you shall become...but not yet! That is why she knows you but you don't know her because she is your future! I LOVE IT!! You are a gifted story-teller and you kept my interest even when my phone was ringing!! They can WAIT!!
Keep up the marvelous work...and WRITE ON!!!
Luv,
Alex
This is a great poem on a very interesting subject. I have often wondered as to the fate of Judas Iscariot..whether, because he did his job, he was saved?...OR, because of the nature of the job, was he condemned? Poor thing!
Great subject...interesting view...extremely thought-provoking!
Keep on Writing On!!
Luv,
Alex
I love the "old school" rhythm in your poetry. Many writers have gotten away from the rhyme that we were taught to maintain in poetry. This is wonderful. I can FEEL the emotions of the old key and the elation relayed in the ending stanza. This is VERY nice and I'm headed in to read more from you!
Keep it up!!
Luv, Alex
Strangely thought-provoking. Coming and going through time to take revenge! What if we COULD?...would we? I must say this story is macabre but I could not take my eyes away. "Payback is hell", huh? I'd love to see a movie based on this! Maybe soon...
Keep up the good..but wierd...work!! (smiles) You are on to something big!!
Luv,
Alex
I like this. The subject of church people with difficult questions for kids brings up so many funny memories of my growing up in Sunday School.
Be encouraged...and write on!!
Luv,
Alex
Thinking back about love, huh? Nice...and vivid. I like it. Except for a few typos it is great!
Keep up the beautiful work! It's gonna pay off soon!
Luv,
Alex
Taking the time to ponder one's life during such a frightening circumstance conjures up many emotions. The thoughts you conveyed were purely "human" and, I'm sure, universal. Great food for thought! But, is the end of the story the "end"? I wonder...
I like this!
Keep on writing on!!
Luv,
Alex
Cute...I can relate to the pressure of taking an exam and the teacher DOES seem to make it worse sometimes.
I like this and I like your talent of depicting the tension before a test so vividly.
Keep up the great work. I look forward to much more of your writings!
Luv,
Alex
This is such a heartfelt story. My grandmother raised me too and I NEVER did leave her...at least, not to stay. What a decision for a 15-year-old child to make...to disturb the security of a home and a life offered by people who CHOSE to make you a part of them! I really do like this and look forward to reading much more from you.
'Seems like the wind is SO much like the guys I've known in my life. (smiles) Very nice imagery. I did not "get it" at first, but as the poem continued, I could see the romance between the tree and the very nature that nurtures it. Nice.
Kooky!...but, if cats COULD talk, that WOULD be the most likely conversation. I love your attitude. It seems as if you write for fun. That's how your poem feels...like fun!
I am from the "country" and we use to ride horses and rope cows for fun. I LOVE this because it depicts the exact cadence of horseback riding and of how you, your horse and nature become one!! I can recall the great fun we use to have through YOUR work! Splendid!!
A cry for help if I've ever seen it. Vivid and haunting...sort of. I don't mentally connect with it but I can "feel" it. There is something about it that I can relate to subconsciously. It reminds me of something I can't remember.
This is cute...and it sounds like Tom is a single father! Only a dad would use the good China for condiments!! But he seems like a dedicated provider and I'm really feeling Tom.
Well...well...well. He just didn't know what he missed out on because if you are as beautiful as your poetry, he SHOULD have been there! Extremely revealing and the sadness because of his absence is obvious in EVERY line. Yet, somehow, I feel that you (the writer) have matured and have forgiven. I might be wrong...but that's what I feel when I get to the last verse.
Sweet....
Luv,
Ales
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