This is beautiful.... love is an amazing thing everyone has a soul mate ,everyone is meant for someone and once you find that someone your life is complete and happy. please keep writing your very good:)
AliceRose~
Wow, im truly impressed with this poem its very beautiful and dark, mystic i love this please keep writing. one of the best poems ive ever read :)
~Alice~
This was nice, i like how you showed how you can love someone this almost hate someone, this was very interesting please keep writing your very good :)
~Alice~
Wow, i think thats the most beautiful,sad thing ive ever read... this shows alot emotion its wonderful i love it i cried alittle bit :) this is good please keep writing .
~Alice~
I love this, i love how you explained your feelings,It makes me realize how much stress my mom goes threw, this was very good please keep writing, putting your feelings down is a great stress reliever.:)
~AliceRose~
Wow,I never thought a clown's job could be so hard and stressful, i love how you explained his stress and anger.I really feel sorry the clown and that parents he punched so deserved it but then again thats my personal thoughts, keep writing this was very good,
to be honest when i started reading this i almost thought about not reading anymore but right when i had that thought it soon went away because you caught my interest anyone that can make a clown inserting and explain how stressfull there job is ,is a dang good writer please keep writing.
~AliceRose~
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