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Rated: E | (3.0)
Sarder, I think that you have a very good start to an emotionally charged poem. As I read through it a time or two I began to hear a cadence reminiscent of Alan Ginsberg. It still needs some tightening up and refining though, not necessarily rhyming but with the cadence or with some alliteration or consonance. Give it a few weeks to "ferment" and then come back to it for a fresh look.

Michael Meier
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