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Review of Dear Grandpa  Open in new Window.
Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Awww, it was such a heartfelt letter to your grandfather that it reminded me of my great grandparents who have both passed and it made me want to cry. I know he would be proud of you if he could see you now. *hugs* to you
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Review of A Life Not Right  Open in new Window.
Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Again, great job. I really like this subject too since there aren't many people who actually write about it. If you have any more pieces on this same subject and don't mind to share, I would very much like to read them.
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Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem! Lol, I'm glad that someone else can relate to this too. *grins* Anyways, excellent word choice, and I love the way the entire piece flows. Great job!
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Review of Shocking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a nicely written poem, and I enjoyed it greatly. Since my family has a history of depression and my favorite aunt and several of my friends have been diagnosed as being bipolar, I can definitely relate to this poem.
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Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting and definitely unique little verse. I liked it immensely. Keep up the good work.
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Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting idea behind this poem; I like it. The only thing that I would really change about this is in the first paragraph where you say "little nagging thing". The word "thing" is such a vague term that it's not a really good choice to use in creative writing. I think it would help your piece if you picked a much more expressive term such as maybe the word "thought". I really did enjoy this piece. Keep up the good work.
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Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely beautiful poem. It's so full of emotion, so full of pain and heartache that it makes me want to take you in my arms and hold you until the pain subsides. I hope that truly didn't happen to you. A friend of mine is going through the same thing right now, and it hurts me that all I can do as a friend is hold him and tell him that things will work out. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Strangers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I genuinly enjoyed this piece and like the way that it flows even as it sends the message that in this world so full of hate that there are still those who marry for life. It's sad that people need to be reminded of this, but I think your poem does a good job of that. Keep up the good work.
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Review of ESCAPISM  Open in new Window.
Review by Alysen Mickeale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can't think of a single thing to change! Excellent piece! You described perfectly how I feel when I'm in a writing trance (particularly since my prose is mostly fantasy). I especially like the ending you wrote; it closes the selection very well. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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