Wow. Great story and perfect use of descriptive language. I could literally see this happening in my head. I usually don't read stories like this but this one hooked me in from the start and kept me interested. I wish I had more info on the eternal though. Overall amazing story.
Great! I love the mood you set with the words as the impending tsunami comes in. It's kind of depressing really, which I really like in literary work. It reminds me somewhat of an Edgar Allen Poe poem or even something by H.P. Lovecraft (the poems I mean, not the supernatural horror stories). Overall I enjoyed it.
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