Truthfull- too much exposition, It could do with more action based exploration; by that I mean
-Dialogue
-Tense scenes like seeing a specifically odd decidious tree that sets up somehting
-interior monologue
-etc. There're other ways of going about it look it up
Your action scenes could use some work- structure wise it's fine- try some of Stephen King's works, it reads well like in the Gunslinger
I have to say, a good effort but could use a lot of plot doctoring, Try learning the three act structure or going through with this. It could work though with some effort
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