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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Author:- Kate - Writing & Reading Author IconMail Icon
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 Vanilla Days ~ Acrostic w/ Synonyms Open in new Window. (E)
Poetic Paradise ~ Vanilla ~ Acrostic w/first word each line a synonym for vanilla
#1096282 by Kate - Writing & Reading Author IconMail Icon

Review requested by:- jessiegirl
Reviewed by:- Anu Author IconMail Icon

Nicely crafted Acrostic.

The flow could be improved by changing words here and there that restrict it.

Lackluster hours of work and play – this is my favorite line.

I have no more suggestions to offer. Overall, this piece was interesting. I have given you a high rating because of that.

Thank you for sharing !
Ananya.

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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Author:-Ann Ticipation Author IconMail Icon

Item:-
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Hello,

A very delightful, wonderful and brilliant poem bringing about the spirit of Christmas !

Consider this line:-
The presents we are gaily wrapping,
The presents we are merrily wrapping,

I thought “gaily” somehow restricted the casual flow…

Rhyme scheme used is very good.

The last para carries a very beautiful message !

Even though it is not the time of Christmas now, I would say I could feel everything !! *Smile*

Reviewed by:- Anu Author IconMail Icon
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Review of The Pond  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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 The Pond Open in new Window. (E)
Is this a memory of seeing it in another life?
#1090239 by J. A. Buxton Author IconMail Icon


Author:- J. A. Buxton Author IconMail Icon

Hello,

If this really is a memory of seeing it in another life, I bet you had a marvelous “another life” *Smile*

Very nice imagery and the description is wonderful. Lovely image.

The cool water, the fragrance of the flowers, I could feel everything !

Overall, i would say, this piece is very nice, pleasant and delightful.

Reviewed by: Anu Author IconMail Icon
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Review of Spring  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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 Spring Open in new Window. (E)
"Through The Windowpane"
#1090021 by T.L.Finch Author IconMail Icon

Author:-T.L.Finch Author IconMail Icon

Hello,
I always like reading and reviewing items concerned with Spring or Autumn. Your poem is just another piece that pulled me to review !

My suggestion:-
Maybe you could use some other word for "pungent" in the last para. It somehow doesn't deliver that happy feeling of Spring.The flow can be a little better.

*Thumbsup*I enjoyed this poem, it has very nice description and imagery and the feeling that the poem gives is great !

*Thumbsup*The second, third and the fourth para are the best !

*Thumbsup*You have different rhyme schemes in every para and still kept the flow good.

Reviewed by:-Anu Author IconMail Icon
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, emma jean Author IconMail Icon

Item :-
 House of Tall Pine Open in new Window. (E)
The feeling one can get when in a stand of pine
#1092945 by emma jean Author IconMail Icon


*Thumbsup* Your poem is very good.

*Thumbsup* The description is very nice. The imagery is lovely.

*Thumbsup* Most of the lines are really creative.

My Suggestions:-

I think you made a very small mistake there :-to high for me - too high for me..

Try adding commas, etc especially in the second, third and fourth para to make the flow better.

*Thumbsup* Overall, i think you have done a great job ! Keep it up !

Reviewed by:- Anu Author IconMail Icon
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
*claps* "Short and sweet!!!"

Very magical and very sweet. You are really good at imagery.

I can feel you poems, Nikola. I haven't given "perfect" rating to many ! You just make me do it !

Have you sent these peoms to any magazines or any Publishers ? They are all great !

I like the way you have shown the pond "glowing" by
moon's light !

*Star*My favourite (all the lines are great !):
"Twigs frozen, adorned
with glittering ice."

You are giving me the "chill" effect !

Brilliant, cute poem ! I'm going to read every poem of yours *Smile* !

Love,
Anu.

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Review of Autumn Afternoon  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow !! Lovely poem !

Good imagery and Onamotopoea in this poem !!!

My favourite:-
*Star*Rippling waters of a clear mountain stream
*Star*Golden aspen leaves quaking on their twigs

I have no suggestions at all for this piece ! I simply loved the picture that you have put up, "She whispered her Secrets".. You have arranged everything so well in your Port !

Every line in this poem is lovely ! I don't know how to describe the feeling i got after reading this.. You took me "there" !!!

I'm giving you a "perfect" rating because your poem is simply wonderful ! The description, the sounds that you show, everything is so perfect !!

I'll be a frequent visitor *Smile*!! You are on my favourites list !

Love,
Anu.
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,

What i really liked:-

These lines:-

I know
that a word
to describe such beauty,
does not exist
nor ever will.

Why i'm giving you the rating:-

*Star* Description
*Star* Presentation

My suggestions:-

Presentation

Really very good. Good colors and clever use of emoticons..

Grammar/Punctuation-

I look to the pale blue sky

at

the peacefulness

try excluding "the"

Flow-

Good.

Overall :-

Short and sweet.

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Happy New Year !
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this one.Very good job. Certain parts were really funny especially "Voldemort" and "Hogwarts" !

Fans of Ron wouldn't be happy reading this !

This one is a must-do for all Harry Potter fans(except fans of Ron) !

Good work !
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Overall:-

Totally different letter.. I'll give a high rating for your unique letter..

My suggestions:-

-Why don't you try giving the Elf a name ?

-Try adding Christmas colors to it..(this is just extra so people will be attracted to read your piece)
And also, try adding pictures to this piece.

-I didn't find any mistakes in the spellings or grammar. the flow was good.

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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Overall:-
Wow ! That was a good reading.. I really enjoyed it !
I was wondering what you were talking about first, then slowly everything cleared up.. good work !

Spellings/grammar:-

Perfect. i didn't find any defects !That's why you are getting a high rating from me.

My suggestions:-
try adding colors and try to make the presentation better..

That's all !

Great job !

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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
my overall response:-

a very good attempt. Easy, simple and lucid.


my favourite lines:-

They creep up behind like a silent dark beast
Stalking their prey, until suddenly they catch
A right moment, then they pounce and snatch
Their unsuspecting owner, devour, have a feast.


my other comments:-

i have to admit that i liked this poem very much. Though it didn't scare me, i think it is very imaginative and creative.

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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey,

You have taken the spells from Harry Potter books and formed your poem. That is really creative. i hope you do more stuff like this.

But i think you should take care of the flow a little more. Only a little more. Otherwise, i think it is a brilliant work !

My favourite lines:-

Impedimenta! Starlynn, bind this world.
Bind what is ugly, unleash what is true.
Hold only love in your heart.
Find only beauty in your self.
Hold yourself to that.
To the good, the noble, the lovely.

The binding curse.. i am glad you used it to express something positive !
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
the list is really long !

I never knew of this disorder till now. I mean, i know many in this, but i never heard any of my friends or relatives talking about this aspect when we discussed personalitites..

what exactly is "bipolar disorder" ?
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
To be honest, I've never heard of this disorder.
Maybe my knowledge on these topics is nil.

I see that in the article that you have linked to this page, many notable figures are also affected with it...i really don't know the meaning of this. it is a positive one or a negative one ?
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Review of Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
my overall response to the poem:-

Great ! Immensely creative, productive and ingenious !


My favourite lines:-

a gentle voice
not heard in years
whispers soflty
"Always here for you",


You could have used :-

sheen for "lustre"
imprudent for "foolish"

I really liked it.. Keep it up !
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Superb! Fascinating !

Harry Potter and Dudley temporarily forgetting their animosity toward one another ? that really amazed me !

Very well done ! I loved this bit !
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
cool !

i really enjoyed this !

Me, the judge ! Ha ! very very good..

this is the frist one i have done and this has bulit interest in me to do more !! cool !

Great job !
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Review of Under the Bed  Open in new Window.
Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
you have already scared me !

i always had this kind of thought before, to be honest. i am overcoming this now and thank god i'm doing it ! it all started when my friend once hid under my bed and tried to scare me by grabbing ! And she really did it..
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Review by Anu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This piece is very useful.
But there should have been more points in it so the newbies can find it as easy as possible.
"The Content Of A Review" Should have been more elaborate giving details about how the starting of a review should be and how a review should be ended.
Other than these points, everything is good.
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