Hello, I am Animesh. I am new here and I am so overwhelmed by what this site has to offer me that for the past couple of hour I have been reading one article after another and here I am reading your story.
Tax and its related things do little to excite me and I have no qualms in admitting that what attracted me to your story is the promise of an extraordinally large reward of GPs. Having said that, you should not think me as a person so mean that he is here only to loot the GPs. I also care that whatever I write in my review helps you to improve yourself. I am having problem in getting this story, especially the ending. The clock shows six'o clock. Does it have any significance? It was six'o clock when Jay finished her acrimonious conversation with her sloppy uncle and went out in her jeep to the tax department. She returned tp her room at nine thirty and latter fell asleep. Did she woke up in the same evening all the things she did she did in her dream? Or did she wake up in the next morning? In that case she has the whole day infront of her to file her tax return. Or whether she woke up in the next evening, sleeping through the entire night and also through the next day, the last day to file her return?
I also noticed some syntax errors in the article which felt like potholes and totally avoidable.
Best of luck.
Yours truly,
Animesh Sarkar
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