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Review of The Door  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The personification and diegetic narration of the door makes this piece incredibly different and refreshing.
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Review by Annie Dobson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Lovely imagery here, but perhaps the ellipses should be
"You are Nature...
I love you"
-Annie x
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Review of awake.asleep  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked the interesting use of structure here and how it relates to your language. This is quite a different poem. I can't think of any significant improvements.
-Annie x
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Review of Beg and Plead  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good. Your repetition of the first line of each creates the sense of ongoing desperation and suffering and the rhetorical questions further this an add more interest and variety. I can't think of any significant improvements.
-Annie x
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Review of aprils  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is lovely. I love your use of imagery. Well done :)
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Review by Annie Dobson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
The personification of melancholy as a companion is a very interesting and poetic idea. The simplicity of the poem is also well done. I cannot think of any significant improvements.
-Annie x
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