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Review of Knock knock  Open in new Window.
Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job stephanie! This is really good. I love it and youuuuu :) I like how you had the have a conversation, and I also like the twist ending!
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Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I like this alot. Good way to show how important mothers are.. Good job :)
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Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is really good. I like the fact that you made it ryhme and made it make since all at the same time! Good job! And its a cute poem :)
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Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a really good short story. You really expressed the feelings and emotions in it. It made me feel connected and sad when I read it. Good job.
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Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I REALLY like this!! I can understand it perfectly, I see the message you are trying to give out. The way I took it was that you were at some type of support group and expressing your feelings. I love this. GOOD JOB! :)
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Review of It never heals.  Open in new Window.
Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good. I can relate to this poem tremendously because my father just passed away.. I know how it feels to question God about why he did that. Good job!
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Review of if only  Open in new Window.
Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I like the way the two lines are worded. I just think the poem would be really great if you add on more. This poem leaves me with questions. Thats why I think it would be good to add more on because your a great writer.
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Review of Carrot cupcakes  Open in new Window.
Review by Astorey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
I like the way that you used the last word in each line for the first word of your new line. I just feel like doing that is very hard, its hard to make some words make sense. For instance in line 10, the poem was going good but that line didnt make any sense. Overall its a good poem.
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