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Review of Look At Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
VERY NICE WORK!!!
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Review of Bless me.  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
EXCELLENT...BUT THE POEM'S IDEA IS I HOPE NOT UR IDEA TOO...
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Review of Dreamworld  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
VERY NICE WORK!!!
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Review of Lies  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
VERY NICE WORK!!!
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Review of MISSING YOU, MOM.  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I had tears in my eyes when i read ur poem...MAY GOD HELP YOUR MOTHER ATTAIN ITERNAL BLISS AND PEACE..
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Review of Weird Craft  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
nice one!!!
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Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nice poem ...I liked it very much...In the starting did you intend to put the fullstop or is it an error...and the second line is somewhat wrong ,i feel"But to heavy keep open,"should have been too heavy to keep open...Its just my thought..

If you liked my review then please do read my highlighted poems...

Regards
Kraser
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Review of Mark Of Respect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First of all let me edge out the mistake i found...
An acknowledgement for those that cried...Her instead of that it should have been those who survive...Its my thinking..The rest is ur own wish...I specially liked the last two lines of the first stanza...Overall an very emotional topic True to its words...

Please do read and review my poems as i am willing to hear an comment frm you..

Regards
Kraser
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Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
hey pallavi...its me arjun...please do R&R my poems...I liked this bit of pottermania
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Review of under my own  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the free atitude of the poem.....please do write more poems in this genre as i fell ur good at it..


Please do review my new poem...Boy! He was beaten
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Review of Chat Room Lover  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Never once had we met
in touch not by sound...thes lines are very nice


undworldly...speeling is wrong

Overall a nice poem..

plz do read my poems and comment on them
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Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
very nice poem indeed...i specially liked the way the lines are placed...After all the hurt and pain you put me through,
I still believe and have faith in you.
So I'll say good-bye and get on with the living,
Remember, true love is always forgiving.
These lines are too good for an ending...kudos!!!!

Please do read my poems and R&R them..
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Review of Towards the Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Excellent job!!!!!!!!Plz just try to avoid the full stops that u have used in different places ..The spelling of forgiveness is wrong and in the line as I nearer to it come"...I think the apt change for it would be " As nearer to it,I come"...overall an good poem..
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Review of The Archer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
hey very nice poem....i liked the lines "until the hunger passes
lie in each other's arms
until the darkness explodes
and hurls the particles through space
thrusting light into the vacuum" very much....The repetation of words "ourselves" can be done a little more creativily or if i may suggest plz change the them into two different words..

Please do read my new poem
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Review of What is Love?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
nice rhyme scheme...overall I liked it....


And about the poem...Bird without wings...

I have edited it ..now please comment on it
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Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Please upgrade my membership...If and only if you like my work,then please help me build up my moral...
Waiting in anticipation of an helping hand...

Regards as always
Kraser
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Review of Drone  Open in new Window.
Review by Stevenson Prose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
very nice job!!!!!!
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