*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Come up with more clever work!
"You will succeed when you are dedicated to your goals. Set some NOW, and be successful!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice =4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 4 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Interesting set of circumstances, go story!
"Seek opportunities everywhere, be successful where you look!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting =4 stars
5.Characters = 4 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Take a positive approach to problem solutions.
"Your nerves and self-confidence are a sign you care!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 3 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Great start to good plot. Get back to it soon!
"Don't let fear keep you from following your dreams!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Very interesting piece. Top to bottom, intriguing, Very good.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions =A very moving piece. Keep up the good and fascinating work!
"Your poetry will help make people's lives better!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars, great area to persuade your readers
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.75 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Keep up the impressive work!
"Don't let fear keep you from sharing a sharp mind!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.75 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Keep writing. Loved your subject here.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 3 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.25 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Very deep here? Is this a confession or a heartfelt belief?
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 3 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Deep thought went into this piece. So much truth in the lines!
"Choos the best next step, even ikf it is difficult!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Cleverly written piece. Like seeing everyday items almost come alive!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Good work, stay with your strengths!!!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Perfect Mummy!
"Seek opportunities everywhere you look and be successful!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Loved your subject and style. I look forward to your additional work!
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 3 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters = 3 stars
6.Dialog =5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 3.42 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = "You will succeed, have an abundance of energy, and be dedicated to your goals!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Great creation utilizing music, poetry, and non-humans.
"Seek opportunity in every new interaction and situation!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Happy anniversary. This was a very heartfelt and intimate poem. Congrats to you and hubby!!!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4.5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4.5
Overall = 4.75
AQ’s Suggestions = Nice description, especially for such a young author. Keep writing, you are very observant!
"Your success depends on solving problems and adding value to others!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4.5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.87
AQ’s Suggestions = Very creative. Your careful observance produced a fun piece. Keep it up, very tasteful work!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 5.0
AQ’s Suggestions = This piece covers all the bases of creativity!
"Choose the next best step, even if it is difficult!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4.5
2. Plot = 5
3. Style and Voice = 4.5
4.Scene/Setting = 5
5.Characters = 4
6.Dialog = 4.5
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.6
AQ’s Suggestions = Very thought provoking. Great story. Know you have more
"Approach eac day with an open mind and a willing heart!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics =5
Overall = 4.75
AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent work. It's an easy-to-understand piece. Keep up the fine writing!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.5
AQ’s Suggestions = Nice couplet. Need to write more and go deeper.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 Interesting physical format of your work 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.75
AQ’s Suggestions =
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