I just read my second piece of your work. I have now gained an insight to Catwoman and Writing.com. You have a fantastic family. I have no idea who started this site, But it is the best I have found. I find that when I review I also gain in my ability to write. I have learned that reviewing is the best way to improve your on writing. Thank You and your family for a place I can grow my abilities.
I wish I did not have to rate this to review it. I am very new at writing and have little understanding of all the different types of poetry and other forms of writing. I would like to understand. This seems to be just ramblings of the mind?
I believe you have written a very good poem. I had a little trouble with the first two lines, but after that it flowed. Like all good poems it told a short story that you could understand in each line. As for the first two lines! GREAT Poems are written from the heart. How can you change what is. There must be nothing wrong with those lines. It has to be Me!
I am no poet and have no expertise of poetry writing. All I know is what I like and if it rings to me. You have written a very nice poem. It was on a nice subject. Oh, almost all poems are of love and feelings. You did a very nice job. It started off a little slow, but was very good at the end. I had the most truble with the word pence and the line it accompanied. But very nice anyway.
Your text was very well written. You had something of interest happening at all time. This kept me reading none stop to the end. I do think there are a few places where you can reword some things and make it read a little easier. Some of the text was kind a, how can I say it.. Flat or plain. Kind a dull to read when you take each sentence by them selves. If you haven’t published anything yet, I know you will if you keep writing.
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