Wow! I really enjoyed this little tale very much and the humorous twist at the end was very surprising. I loved the way you opened the story with a question. This captured my attention quickly and held it to the end. If anyone loves to read about witches and imps, this is the tale for them.
What I Liked the Most There were two things I liked the most. The simple fact that when I started reading I could not stop until I reached the end. Second, I enjoyed the poem you weaved into the tale.
What I Disliked From my perspective the story seemed to symbolize the toll having spoiled children does to a mother.
Favorite Line Do you like secrets? Of course, you do; I cannot imagine anybody not liking secrets.
Three Cheers for Professor Proot’s Extra Fantastic Secrets of Avalon. Thanks for sharing and Write On!
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