Darn scientists - how they play god. Your poem inspires one to keep an anger for such outrages. Poem is constructed well and keeps its rhythm and pace throughout.Touched a nerve.
You have a unique voice and your words seem to shout in joy. There is a reverence to the tone of your poem...with sprinkle of humor, The imagery of the sun rising and the earth beginning to glow was powerful. Your line spacing work especially well - making each line shout and rejoice. I very much enjoyed this lovely work
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