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Review of Devil magic Blues  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is truly a wonderful writing effort that tells us how we get Rock N Roll, the parallel music. It's too hard to deliver but the writer does it with perfection. How can music create an impact in our hearts? That item is a perfect example. We have an emotional attachment to music, that much we understand.
It is a great beginning.
Write on!
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette returned home safely. But Your Highness ordered them to participate in the Big Star Festival with her. So, preparation began. How did Minh T and Toadette prepare themselves? That is the subject of the chapter. No mentionable happening was there.
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Review of Toadette's Story  
for entry "Chapter 34 - Lady Bow" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
After a long long uncertainty, they most probably released. Again, the factor was Toadette. Lady Now wanted her body as a loan for a night. Toadette tolerated that disgusting offer for the sake of other members of the group. After a ten-hour slot, Toadette got back to Penelope and Minh T. Most probably, there was no danger left. Would they be allowed to return home? That type of indication was there.
What will happen next?
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I reckon this is not a story, it is an outline of a great novel. There is a lot of scope to be an interesting storyline.
Malik is the hero of the story. There was a rumour that his father was a powerful Damon. So, they called him the "Son of a Devil".
Once, a terrible drought struck the village, causing crops to wither and water sources also dry. The villagers were desperate for a solution. Despite their brutal attitudes, kindhearted Malik felt for them and prepared himself to on a journey to find a legendary spring said to possess magical powers.
That was a very hard task. He struggled a lot along the way and became successful.
After his return, none call him the "Son of a Devil".
It is a dramatic, adventure and an emotional story.
I especially like the message which is in the story. Reminding everyone that true strength lies in one's character, not in the rumours. Even, we, the civilised people, also make the same mistake. It is truly unfortunate. I have a further comment to the writer of the story. Please, Split the story into chapters. Then patiently shape those chapters. I hope that will be a good novel.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette were facing the toughest oppositions in Boo's Mansion. Despite the intelligence of Toadette who won every taught battle, she didn't get any clue about survival. Boos used modern technologies. Ultimately, they squeezed them very tightly.
Would they rescue? We can't understand it. Let us hope for the best.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
We expected an exciting chapter. It fulfilled our expectations. The chapter was full of uncertainty. Anyhow they reached Boo's Mansion but entering was not so easy.
At the last moment. Boo's accepted themselves. But Toadette greeted Your Highness to send them to the Death Mansion.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter to know it.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette began another adventure in the Boo's Mansion in a forever forest. Minh T and Toadette are set in a 360° circular path in the forest. They started their journey in the morning but it was night. But they were rotating in an endless circular way! Was there no way to retrieve it? Suddenly in a few inches distance, Toadette spotted Penelope. They forgot her existence! However, there was no harm done.
Here that chapter ends.
But how would they be rescued from the circular arena? There is no clue. Another exciting chapter is waiting for us.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary peanutbutter

It's a poem of true love. A proper love should be unconditional. That does not mean that you forget that friend who came in time of danger and rescued you. Now you don't need help from that friend. So you refused to know that helper. But, we don't know what role the will play. Suppose you need help of that friend, but after today's denial, can you beg help from him? If you can, you must be shameless.
It's a brilliant beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary peanutbutter

It's a short but very meaningful poetry. In our lives, friendship is the most valuable gift of God. A fortunate person would have a good friend with whom that human can share self-emotions, both sad and joyful. So, the teller requests the partner to remain a true friend forever.
It is a good emotional poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It's another crucial piece of poetry by the poet. The Military service gets honoured too high all over the world. It's due to their sacrifice and moral values which they generally maintain.
Due to the popularity of the Military, many young star wants to be in the Military. But, it is not so easy task. Before involving in this service, one should go through a hard training period. Once you pass, you will be in a most prestigious national job.
Inspiration is there to be a Military.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It's another wonderful creation by the poet. With the increasing population, if you don't arrange it before the prior time, your travelling date may be delayed. So, the travelling business has flourished all through the world. The poet is pointing out the facts and inspires us to grab this new job opportunity. There is ample scope for earning in an honest but challenging way.
This poetry shows us an alternative route to achieving success.
Write on!


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Review of The Poet  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It is the true story of every poet's life. If there is a piece of paper and a pen in the poet's hand, he begins with his creations. Where does he collect those ideas? From daily life experiences. So, readers reckon that these rhymes are their daily lives.
One day, the poet passes away but remains immortal for creation in our hearts forever.
It's a great poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Samberine Everose

Can any human control natural calamities? It's impossible. So, in those needy moments, Military personnel come to rescue us from certain death. Therefore, they become heroes of us. Not only that but their activities inspire the upcoming generations to be Military as a career.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Samberine Everose

It is one of the best rhyming poetry ever read. Our all ideas are always true and correct, but we often do not succeed. Why? Because we don't perform it correctly. We should maintain a middle-of-the-road voice, which we can't. We need to re-use our old ideas to perform a new one. Just the use of wisdom is required for it. It is simple. It's truly an inspiration to do a lot within our limitations.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, we saw Minh T and Toadette lived a topical slavish life. There was no scope for respite! Her Highness never felt for her servants. Even in modern days, we often see subordinates are deprived by the higher authority. But it can't be endless in the Democratic environment whereas in the Kingdom, it was endless.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy went away to that Kingdom in a private aeroplane from where she came from. The journey commenced from the Rooftop of the castle. But before the time of the departure, the Princess expressed her affection to Toadette and gave some tokens to Toadette. She could feel that Princess Daisy had some softness to her. It has an emotional end.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Toadette knew very well how cruel Princess Daisy was. So, when Princess was in deep trouble, she thought to see the result from a safe distance. Again Toadette thought, Princess Daisy should get a chance for rectification and enter into the small war.
At last, General Guy lost but not before he made everybody wounded and tired. He promised to help the Army with those shy guys. They had a beautiful scope to mainstream lives.
Will Princess Daisy change herself or not? That's the question of millions of dollars.
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
When the ruler becomes arrogant and does not care about the general public, a few gangs of anti-social elements become active. Through violence, they can't do anything good for society and are ultimately destroyed.
Princess Daisy was that kind of ruler and shy guys were that anti-social elements.
Toadette's brilliance worked once again and through Penelope, she rescued first. Then saved everyone.
Princess Daisy was happy to get back her favourite ball again.
That's a beautiful way to teach us about the influence of the ruler in our society.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Toadette was arrested and sent to a supreme darkroom by the shy guys. There was none to help her. She was intelligent and confident. So she was starting to find the way without getting nervous. The shy guys were strong but not intelligent. Toadette capitalized on this opportunity and came with the golden ball of Princess Daisy.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's another wonderful piece of poetry that is written by the poet Tim Chiu. From his personal experiences, he realized that a successful career was required for self-motivation and improvement. The success of the company and your career are co-related to each other. So, forget your bitter experiences and disappointments and stay focused on your new goals which will give you fame and respect.
That is the best way to inspire us in the new target-orientated market policy.
It's a brilliant effort.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's great poetry by the poet. Here, he mixed his experiences, philosophy of life and political motivation nicely. It is no doubt a superior, refreshed and developed report that must show us the way to achieve goals as a team, not for personal success. So, this free-verse poetry inspires us to grow up socially but not individually which is the prime importance of fantastic poetry.
The style of writing is awesome.
Write on!


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Review of Addiction  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's a great beginning. Our life is a battlefield. From our birth, it begins and will be ended at the time of death. We have to fight for everything. There is no scope to take some rest. So, many people try to find relief from the addiction. That may come in various forms. It is a wrong step but tired humans often cherish them. They have to pay heavily later. Fortunately, some people don't repeat this mistake, they become winners. The poet wants to show us the truths of life.
Suggestions
Concentrate on selecting your genres. Through genres, we can understand the subject or theme of the writing. It is impossible to understand anything from
'None'genres. So be careful about selecting genres.
Your style of writing is brilliant.
Carry on this performance.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is an extremely exciting chapter. The group of four, Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette, were going to fight against the Shy guys. That would be a difficult task, they knew it. But they did not expect those guys to follow them from the beginning of the train journey. Minh T was the betrayed! Maybe or maybe not! The answer is unclear. But Penelope had been rescued after a tough fight. Toadette fought lonely against four shy guys. She made two of them wounded first. But, they combined trapped her. Would she be rescued?
The chapter ended with this vital question.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Shoes Are Fun  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Happy Anniversary SandraLynn Team Florent!

A child, especially a baby, gradually interacts with the rest of the world with wonder. In this poetry, a child expresses what a shoe is! The child can differentiate the what is his shoes, his father's shoes and his mother's shoes through sound and activities. What an innovative idea that has been beautifully described by the poet.
It's an awesome creation.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's also an interesting chapter. The troupe of four, Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette, realized that they should practice hard if they threw a meaningful challenge against the shy guys. They began to prepare themselves and mainly concentrated on foot exercises.
Princess Daisy wisely advised her mate to concentrate on boxing, too. Shy guys were experts on that.
We also saw that Toadette and Penelope's relationship turned into a new route. She began to see Penelope as her child.
What will happen next?
Is there anything dramatic?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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