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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
If we watched minutely, we would observe that the relationship between Princess Daisy and Toadette became easier. Is that the way to recover from the Hell? It is very early to predict anything. But, a possibility is growing.
Princess Daisy told the internal story of her life, the relationship between her and Peach. It's a very personal matter. If she didn't feel closeness with Todette, she would not tell those. It proved, that a soft corner about Toadette might be growing in her heart.
It's an excellent turn.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic forum. This forum is dedicated to spreading literature. Every month, it highlights a few contests but not activities. That makes the forum unique in characteristics. It will help people to be aware of various contests of WDC.
Brilliant effort.
It should be continued.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
It's a perfect image of nature that we generally see in Autumn season. In a forest, we often witness that type of scenario.
The Red and Golden crunchy leaves imprinting the forest floor. That scene is very common but expressing that in this fantastic way must be admirable.
Most importantly it attains all the characteristics of an ideal Haiku. That's a truly awesome performance.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
We saw previously, that the Royal members of the Castle are big but their hearts were as small as possible. Princess Daisy was one of them.
But Princess kept her word of feet messaging. She had a broader heart. So she massaged the feet of Toadette without any sort of hesitation.
It's truly wonderful.
What will happen next? Only the next chapter can tell that.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Almost every person faced the most difficult time in their life when that human needed true advice from a person but didn't get it. The loneliness was caused by suffering.
Everything was looking dark. No lane of life couldn't be seen. Now, our hearts cordially wanted the support of a guide. But all wishes of our lives can't be fulfilled.
If you don't lose your calmness, you must see the bright lights again in front of your eyes. Just keep your patience.
It's an excellent and thoughtful poetry.
Write on!


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Review of The Smokies  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
It is a traditional Japanese Haiku that was created by the poet. The poet draws an image of the forest of the blue smoke on mountains. The forest is spraying a magic mist. A mesmerising painting to express the beauty of nature.
It's an artistic work.
Write on.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's going to be an exciting adventure story that is perfectly suited for teen readers.
As per the story, the introduced characters are Peter Doleman and Liam Yager. They will be the main characters.
Something is going to be extraordinary. Many characters should come with the story growing up.
I expect something special in the next episode which I can't predict now.
I eagerly wait for the second chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a perfect traditional Japanese Haiku. The poet beautifully draws an image of nature when the Winter begins. The scenario of the first snow descends
in pearls that veil gilded leaves, it looks awesome in our eyes but not for animals and birds, especially birds. So,
crows protest as per their ability.
It's truly a superb creation.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter is full of suspense. Princess Daisy and Toadette both were in severe danger. Especially, Princess had no way to rescue. Being a slave, Toadette didn't wish to leave her alone. So, the life of Toadette is also in danger. Through, the intelligence of Toadette they felt safe. They were returning home.
What will happen next?
We are waiting for the next chapter to get the answer.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This rhyming poetry tells us what can God's love do for us. It's tough but the most important subject in our lives.
The poet tries to explain it in the simplest possible way.
God always regulates our lives mercifully and patiently. Without his wish, nothing will happen. So, devote your life to him. That inspiration is here in the poetry.
It's a rare creation.
Write on!


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Review of After Rain  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
The poet very efficiently draws an excellent image of nature after the rain. After showering fairy rings appear and dance in the circle. That beauty obsessed us. It's a very clear and lively description of the sky which touches our hearts.
Most importantly it fulfils all the characteristics of a traditional Japanese Haiku.
It's a brilliant artistry.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter is very exciting and full of suspense. The atmosphere of Club 64 was bright and entertaining. The environment of the tunnel is wholly opposite. The pipe was dark. Princess Daisy was searching for something. What were those? Toadette didn't understand. The tunnel was too cold. The process felt sick. But, the wisdom of Toadette saved her life. They wished to go back. That was not an easy task.
Princess Daisy heard the sound of waves. She knew that area well. So, there was a slight ray of hope. Perhaps. But that wasn't disclosed in the chapter.
We have to wait for the next chapter to know that exactly.


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Review of Life  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The birds in winter succumb to Avian flu. It happens almost every year. It is a tragic scenario of nature. But, after winter spring comes as usual. The new life retains again. So we love spring due to the livelihood.
The silent image of the winter season has been nicely drawn.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's entirely a single person's speech. So we may easily call it a monologue. Though the presentation is humorous, it expresses the dislikings of the teller. The sales personals often disturb us for selling their products even in the odd times. Except for a few, maximum products are sub-standard. That's the concern. That makes us impatient.
That issue has been addressed here.
Good writing skills.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
There are some inhumane tortures started on pop star Diva. This was initiated by the Princess Daisy. She tried to break her vocal cords as she did not sing further. It's a very brutal decision to destroy someone's most costliest treasure. Toadette didn't like it. But be a part of saving Diva.
After Club 64's unforgettable experiences, Toadette went to Toad's Town with Princess to search for the real criminal. Toadette understood that they were probably underground! The reason was unknown.
What will happen next? We can't predict anything. We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Boulangerie  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a nice humour poetry. Supposedly, it looks funny. A man who is an avid eater is halfway through, he finds that he has forgotten to have his snacks. So he turns to get those. But he sees the march of an endless hungry people for bread. He returns to his work and sees the dream of rolling a stone up an endless bread hill.
But, if we try to see the real meaning of the poetry in-depth, we will find, that this poetry tries to highlight a burning issue of the modern world. This is nothing but hunger. Many people in our nation are even now below the poverty level. They suffer to earn a little food. I saw them. They are habituated to starvation. A little glimpse of that mournful scenario has been exposed here. It's a sad scene.
Some think that it is a pessimistic thought. But it's reality.
Now we focus on that man who is strong in calculating every matter. His wisdom provokes him to stone up an endless bread hill. That is truly a positive thinking. We should do something for those helpless people. Wishing to serve something for the nation in your limited capacity should be the primary objective of our lives.
I especially like the message.
It is an excellent poetry.
Write on!


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Review of She was Beautiful  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It occurs prologue of a story. If we follow the writing carefully, we must find a poet is writing a story. The teller describes her beauty with perfection. Her body is totally beautiful. The poet collects the whole body's glamour from nature. It's truly artistic.
There is a hint of suspense, too. But it is not so clear. I think that will be more clear as the story goes on.
The beginning is impressive.
Continue this rhythm.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is a very exciting chapter. It's full of suspense. Does Princess Daisy find one of her thieves in Club 64 Cafe? This thief is none other than pop singer Diva! It looked seemingly impossible. But Princess identified Diva as a bandit. So she entered into the green room with Toadette.
Most surprisingly, Diva also identified Princess Daisy and a list of stolen had been found from the singer. So, the doubt is correct!
What will happen next? It's unknown to us. We have to wait for the next chapter for further happenings.


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Review of Autumn leaves  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is beautiful poetry that creates an image of nature when the season is beginning. The style of writing is perfect.
The readability is awesome. It follows all the rules of an ideal traditional Japanese Haiku except one.
All three lines should be unrhymed in nature. But here, the first and third lines are in rhyme. That is a violation of rule. That should be corrected.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
At last, the Princess Daisy appeared with her style and glow. She took everything in her control immediately. A dramatic environment was created. Princess began to torture Toadette. Toadette dropped from the top of castle.
Did she die or remain alive? We can't predict anything. To know the reality, we have to wait for the next chapter.
The story is running well.
Maintain this pace.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a true story of our real life. We, the general public, are often tortured at the hands of fate. A few people become frustrated and mournful. They give up their fight. The poet mentions them as 'weak'.
But some people behave oppositely. They re-group themselves after a setback. As per the poet, they are 'brave'.
The teller's lover is one of those courageous persons. So she feels proud of him.
It's an emotional poem. But, this poetry contains great lessons for us. First, the poet nicely differentiates between 'weak' and 'strong' persons.
Secondly, the 'strong' people can struggle against the adverse situation. So they have a scope to be a winner.
Thirdly, only the winner will get respect, honour and love from other people.
So, the lover feels proud of him.
Finally, nobody will remember the deeds of a loser.
The line I especially like:-
"You went into a cruel battle and fought your way back

You rised from the despicable clutches of evil and survived to tell the tale"

It's an wonderful creation.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In the first chapter, we find Hannah as a central character of the story. Some other characters also play an important role surrounding her, especially Brigette.
It is a mysterious story. It is yet to be solved. But we reckon that there is at least one incident from ancient Greek history that is very closely related to the entire matter.
In an old palace, Hannah selected an attractive room from where she could see
a lucrative island. She wanted to go there. Brigette helped her. But, on that island, her life was in danger. Brunette gave her a painkiller juice. It worked magically. Hannah didn't know the formula of the juice.
Was she gone in past? That is also unknown.
Excellent start. It's full of suspense.
We are waiting for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy will come soon. So, intelligent Toadette tries to collect some information about her. This is Toadette's basic preparation. So, Penelope is the perfect person to collect that information. Penelope helps her to get a few pieces of information about Princess Daisy.
But is it enough? The answer will be received in the next chapter. We are waiting for that chapter eagerly.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It's truly a brilliant blog that gives us a clear idea about the public domain.
It is used more in fanfiction than any other. After ending the copyright, anybody can add a few characters which were not in the original version for the sake of popularity and business. It's a public domain where the story re-writes on the shadow of the main story. It's the reality that is explained here nicely.
Well done.
Write on!


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Review of Harukaze  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a wonderful traditional Japanese Haiku that can draw the perfect image of Harukaze, the Spring wind. A pink flower blossoms which beautify nature. That flower was Swaying in the sensual rhythm. Harukaze enters. His sweet winds add a separate dimension. So those flowers can sing their songs.
The description is very lively. It also follows all the required characteristics of an ideal traditional Japanese Haiku should have.
It's a beautiful artistry.
Continue your delightful creation.


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