We live in today and don't know what will happen tomorrow. This is the mystery of life that makes us optimistic.
In this poetry, there are two men. They are separated due to unwanted circumstances. But they keep their promise. Their separation can not force them away from the promise. That is true gentlemanship.
That is the beauty of the poem.
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It's a wonderful snapshot of a night. We can see a scene lively. The cockroach, a little bug, is watching us minutely. Fear psychosis is such that can cause any kind of panic. A few of my past experiences were witness of those. We laugh but they can't.
That family also has that kind of fear psychosis. So they are panicking.
It's extremely well written.
It is a wonderful rhyming poem about a stray cat and a silly dog with two people. It's mainly written for children but adult readers also can take lessons from it.
It's a simple incident that shows us how to adjust to a bit unfavourable situation. This lesson should be learned by kids and aged persons.
The expression is simple but striking and needs the hours.
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It's a very thoughtful poem that contains several couplets. As per the teller, it's a forbidden love. But, is love truly forbidden? I don't think so. It is a genuine love the romanticism is at an extreme level. It's an exploration of the emotion 'love' that doesn't tell whether it is forbidden or not.
The sense of rhythm is truly appreciable.
Well done.
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It is a crime and suspense story. The main characters are Harvey and Helen, but several characters play supportive roles to give a meaningful end. The critical relationship between them is the subject of the story. It is now in terrible condition that forced them to do guilt. It makes the story both dramatic and tragic.
Is there no scope to avoid the tragedy? It may control at some stage. But, now, it's out of control.
So, there is an important message for the society. Try to regulate the crisis before it out of control, otherwise, you will suffer in future.
Excellent story.
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Yes, it's a wonderful Eintou poem on the topic of Remember. A mother's love. I also felt in my life that the mother's love can't be forgotten. The poet also tells us the same. He expressed this clearly. But the economy of words is truly appreciable.
Reading this type of beautiful poetry is one of the happiest experiences in my life.
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A classic scenario. A man is driving a car. His wife is with him. He enjoys the romance with his life partner without thinking otherwise. But his wife remains alert. So she yells to stop the car to avoid undue accident.
What do we take a lesson from the scene? At least one from every couple should remain cautious about incoming dangers, otherwise, you have to suffer.
It is a great advice. The scene is very lively.
It is a tremendous job.
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After a hard night shift, the poet returned home. He was tired. His pet- cat in the House greeted him cordially as he returned from a long night's work.
That cat began to give comfort as per his limited ability. The poet was also very pleased.
Can we not take a lesson from the pet to attain our near and dear ones when he returns home after a tough working day?
Brilliant poem.
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It's simply a true picture of our society. Demons become powerful. So unrest takes place. People don't protest it. It doesn't mean that they like it. They are afraid of those demons. Unprotested activities inspire them to do further wrong.
This is the high time. We have to be organized first. Then create a strong objection against the administration. Otherwise, these sad days will continue.
Excellent thought. We must appreciate the poet.
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It's simply a great free-verse poetry. We know well that there are a variety of psychology. People encased themselves in different methods of fantasies. As it is unreal, it tends to break down so often.
After breaking those walls, we become free. We should begin a fresh and prosperous journey. But we don't do it. We wrap ourselves in another impossible dream. In that way, we are enslaved in the world of fantasy for our whole life.
That pathetic tendency has been drawn here by the poet fantastically.
It's an excellent poetry. Keep this momentum in future.
It's a brilliant poem that contains a sweet and simple scene. That scene is described too beautifully. So we can witness the scene lively.
A red-headed woman walks in her beautiful flower garden. The day is also looking good. Her neighbour flirts with her. She also accepts it in a funny mood. He gives her a dating proposal. She is agreed and preparing herself for dating.
It's a lovely short story that creates a fantasy world. But we can get some lessons which should be applicable in our human lives.
First, there should be some rules in a state. But, the administration should arrange some relaxation for the entertainment but within some sort of disciplinary conditions.
When it applies, the public also becomes joyful mood and the state rescues from a mechanical lifestyle.
So motorized lifestyle can't do better for us. Festive moods are required but in a disciplined manner.
Excellent writing style. Well done.
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That is tiny poetry but carries a deeper sense. It is very dramatic, too. A man always tries to remember his mistakes. As his sense of guilt never dies. At the same time, those crimes shouldn't be repeated.
It is an ideal thought from a person who wants to rectify himself.
A great piece of example has been set.
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It is a sweet littlpeople'se story, mainly written for the children. It is going through nicely due to the conversation between the main character Kasdeya, an old demon and Daria, a little girl of eight years old. Daria insulted her by calling her an old demon who didn't have any strength to create fears in the people mind. That demon didn't admit it first but ultimately, she had to acknowledge that sad fact.
Speed of the story is nice. I love to read it.
It is a very emotional writing. After a long time, the writer returned to his favourite place, a small village. Everything almost remained the same as it was when he left that place. He left, but he always carried those memories of the people who helped to keep each place distinct and unique in his head.
It is simply an amazing creation that strikes in our hearts.
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"Blue Moon" is a brilliant poem that draws an image of a night. The poet tells us that the darkness is all over the sky but a blue moon is bright enough to give a touch of light ray to our mournful souls.
The smallest ray of hope can inspire us to lead a meaningful life.
It is simply wonderful.
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What an excellent poetry it is! Though a bit lengthy but not boring. The readability is great. But, the major attraction of this poem, the poet goes in-depth but the speed remains undisturbed.
In our world, we often see different opinions from several sides which hampers our mental peace. But when we go to the house of God, we can see an ever-happy life where no sorrow or mourning. It is our real home.
In reality, the poet shows us the difference between material and immaterial world.
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We can see those emotional scenes due to the proper selection of words. This is the most charismatic side of this beautiful poetry.
Here the poet tells us a story. Sam Adams was hiking in the mountains on a late autumn day. Unfortunately, A bird-killing virus was spreading quickly all around the world. Only a few countable birds remained alive. Sam met one of them who was going to die. He had a strong determination. So, he captured the dying bird and returned home. Adams seriously took care of the bird and saved the life. That incident inspired him to devote his life to saving the other birds.
The description of the nature and construction style is good.
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The poet draws a perfect image of winter. It is shorter in size but with an accurate description.
We know, the blankets give us comfort in the winter. Those new and frosty snow
blankets would give the same amount of relief to the surface of the earth that she, the earth, can enjoy sleeping.
We see those scenes straight away due to your selection of words.
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It is excellent poetry that tells the status of our subconscious minds. We daily meet with a lot of incidents. Some of them make us happy and others make us anxious. These uncertainties may hamper our mental peace and can create restlessness in our behaviour which is perfectly reflected in this wonderful poetry. The presentation is a bit dramatic but it makes the poem more attractive.
You draw an image of a perfect storm. It is just the beginning. That bad weather may be the cause of severe damage, even loss of life, both human and non-human. Your last line of the poetry
"An arc in the sky" is the indication of the beginning of a serious thunderstorm.
I hope that the loss of property and lives will be minimum.
That poetry was written just before the women's day. So influence of that day is reflected here in this poetry.
The tendency of parents to depend on sons. But why? There is no logic behind this attitude. The statistics tell us otherwise. We often see a daughter can do more sensitive work than a son. She has a mother since birth. So they are sweet and softer than their son. Therefore, the difference between sons and daughters is a crime. We should not do it further.
It's an excellent writing.
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It is simply great poetry that is related to the relationship between a baby and a parent. This is the sweetest relationship. A parent does not want anything from his or her child. Here the child is a girl. So, the parent wants to see her happy and prosperous life.
Another this can be seen here. The flows too fast. He waits for one. Therefore, today's baby becomes a teenage girl too fast. The parent wonders and is happy at the same time.
A brilliant writing.
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It's a brilliant poetry. How beautifully you described your emotions. It's a bit dramatic but also realistic. It may happen in real life. A perfect story always remains in that poetry. It is multi-dimensional. It's a story of sad feelings. It is a story of caring. The end is happy. The construction of the poetry is truly appreciable. A good poetic work.
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