Its a nice work...its nt jst poetry..u r kinda painting a bful picture of the night sky in the first paragraph..i realy liked tht style..wht i dint like was the usage of the word 'I' again and again in the last paragraph...i mean u could have used phrases like "its me who..." etc instead of using 'I' again and again..bt overol the poem is bful..
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