A very good read that is enjoyable all throughout and was something that i couldn't stop reading until i was finshed. While the first few chapters are burden with heavy expostion as soon as you get out of their it is a very fufilling story to the reader.
This piece of poetry is probably some of the most relatable poems i have evr read and the author put it in a way that perfectly describes the pain and the hardship of getting up in the morning but you have to settle with the fact. You just need to, just get out of bed.
A short but sweet piece that is a good choice for a quick read of poetry to pass the time in your day. It intriguingly shows both natures beauty and the stillness that persists in nature while still teeming with life of all shapes and sizes that is fascinating to us.
This poem was very eloquent and also very touching to the heart. I truly brings out ad shows the innocence but also the progression and maturing of the love between two people. Tugs at the heart strings while you read it, bringing your emotions to bear.
Overall this was a good read and it is good for passing a few minutes if you have the time, If i had to suggest one thing to improve this piece of work it would be to try adding some more to the story to make it overall more intersting to read, however it is still a good read currently.
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