Chilling and no doubt a lot of soldiers thoughts are portrayed here. This one particular soldier must have a strong and supportive mother. I thought the paragraph where Nathan and Johny used to play war was especially strong.
I personally see nothing wrong with this piece. It flows well and tells a convincing story. Write On!
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