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Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved your poem on marriage and what a beauty that the rain showered you both with love:)
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Review of Victory  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Dear Friend,
The poem is pretty interesting but could have been written much more better as you seem quite talented! The second stanza is little rough. The thought and idea of motivating people who are close to victory is really modest. "A bit of smile don't deny" is quite genius!


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Review of No Pity  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Dear Elisa,
Your previous articles were so well written but this seems to be a dampener. Somehow, I'm unable to connect with this poem. Sorry!


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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Elisa,

Short sweet and a good reply to your ex, if I'm not wrong! A little bit more would be appreciated.


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Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Friend,

Revenge is best served when cold....that's a lovely payback


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Review of Do you remember?  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Minya

The rhyme is good and poetic, well described and written at peace. Good write


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Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Son Nguyen
Deep thoughts and well rhymed.Lake of Tranquility is really an imagination in today's world. Continue the good thought and work!


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Review of Letters to Mom  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Gary,
Letters to Mom are something genuine and its between your mom and you. I don't have the right to comment or review this. Surely you do miss your mom and Please don't worry she is in Safe Hands and we all will meet after Rapture. I was moved by these letters. I'm sorry if I've said anything hurtful or wrong,Please forgive me.
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Review of Broken Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Friend,
Whoever broke your heart might be regretting it now. I liked the never give up part, so much like "us." A person with a broken heart sure feels his or her heart is in the rubble after an earthquake. I'm sure you wrote this earnestly letting your emotions out. It shows!!!!
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Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Friend,
I liked the irony about how the cowboy says the guy with the recorder is going to pay! You seem pretty smooth and confessional. A good sport too with the made up reviews.
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Review of Reflective Sorrow  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Friend,

Your poem on an abusive relationship has moved my heart.The end rhymes are easy and beautifully crafted. Kudos to a job well done.
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Review of Dreamscapes  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Friend,
Your dreams reflect your attitude to serve God and they say whenever you dream about Church it also means you are growing spiritually. As a young girl myself, I have many dreams about leading praise and worship at Church but someone insults me in the crowd and I cry. As you mentioned in the previous article on dreams, its true that one is overwhelmed by their emotions. Thank you for letting us know and could you also do an article on how symbols in our dreams interpret our religious beliefs because of late I've been dreaming that I'm drowning in the middle of Atlantic Sea in a boat and for a moment everything froze except me and I could see water rushing to engulf me. I woke up with a start. Please help me out with it if you can decipher anything!
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Review of random words  Open in new Window.
Review by Barbrella Claus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Friend,
This work was quite impressive and love hurts at times. The poetic way of presenting love in its negative shades is quite awesome and I feel your masterpiece is talking to a person's feelings directly. Kudos on the good job.
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