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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The story has a way of sending people back to there childhood and in the fact that I think as teenagers we all wanted a thrill. I think that this short story could had a better charcter profile. I also think that the layout of the writing was a great contriubtion to a new writing style. I hope to read more from you.
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Review of Success  Open in new Window.
Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful story

I liked the plot of the story.

The setting was a little but foggy, I think you could set it in a specfic city or time period.

The Characters were well developed in the sense that you wrote them with some much feeling it is easy to imangine them.

Keep on writing!
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Review of Trick or Tweet  Open in new Window.
Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A wise Author said once that Age and treachery will triumph over youth and skill.
- Anonymous
I think your work is a wonderful picece since you fit with in that qute since you care about your followers opions and there way they react.

You are a great author do to the fact that you cant sit back and a imgine yourself being a Character in your books.
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Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This made me feel like I was in this story going through what they main charcters went through and the fight he had to indure.

Do you plan on moving on with this story because if you do I will love to read it.

I was well written in some many ways including the setting for which it was written in.
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Review of Desolation  Open in new Window.
Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A wonderful piece.
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Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was well written and I happy that you write about your past life.
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Review of Out Loud  Open in new Window.
Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very good topic to write about. Please write more.
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Review by ChrisB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I believe that you have the music writer gene if there was one. Keep up the writing of the songs want to read more.
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