Katie the Conibear's (bearattic) Reviews

Katie the Conibear

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#3747259

Review of campfire addition

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hiya,

I enjoyed your short story. I could see it as the beginning of a more intricate piece. You craft a believable brother/sister relationship in a short space of time, the dialogue being light hearted and relaxed.

I found one little spelling mistake, where Mr Jenson says "mines."

Have you read any Iain M Banks? His sci-fi novels are incredibly detailed and very entertaining, I think you would enjoy them :)

Katie x

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#3742124

Review of The Fun House

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Your story took me back to my childhood, and the Goosebumps series of horror fiction I used to read :)

This short story was lots of fun, with some spine tingling thrills and scares as it builds momentum. This genre I believe is always at its strongest when the reader is encouraged to use their own imaginations. A few clues here and there of the characters fate is enough for me. A well paced piece of writing, that grabs and keeps your attention until the end.

Katie x

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#3742057

Review of THE RISE AND FALL OF NOTES

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I enjoyed this very multi-sensory poem. Cleverly set out, the poem literally rising and falling. Beautifully and sensitively written, in keeping throughout with your theme of rhythm and the primal life of nature.

Well done and keep writing! :)

Katie x

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#3742008

Review of Calmness

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A very emotive piece. The emotion of a bereavement never disappears.

Very well structured and measured considering the subject matter.

Katie x

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#3741680

Review of Facing The Inner Fear

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, I enjoyed your poem.

I could feel the anxiety and tension running through the entirety of the piece. The flow was natural and smooth which is something I look for in poetry!

Thank you for sharing :D

Katie x

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#3741677

Review of My Letter To Cocaine

Review by Katie the Conibear

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

I thought i would repay your good deed by reviewing something of yours. :D
I honestly got goosebumps reading this, an honest and heartfelt piece of work. I like the idea of writing to the drug and not the person; a clever way of turning the situation on its head. As with all addictions, it is exactly that, the drug itself that we hate, not the person who has lost their way to it.

Well done! I look forward to reading more.

Katie x