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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for a movie review that is as cheesy as the movie itself - I loved it. I appreciate the research on the actors, and the fact that you took the time to lead in with info about the other vamp movies well-known at the time. I sincerely hope you are reviewing movies at a blog site or elsewhere than just here, so that others can enjoy your freewheeling style. Good luck and keep writing!


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Review of WeedLand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a fun little poem. I like the idea of gardening weeds, and you're right about not having to weed! Your phrasing is nice and light, and both the images and concepts are nicely presented. I hope to see lots more neat little pieces like this from you in the future. Keep writing and good luck!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good beginning to what looks like a great, developing story. Your descriptions are good, and the basic interactions of the characters are pretty sound. Make sure you expand your vocabulary a bit around your dialog, so that your verbs are more descriptive and active, and you can depend less on adverbs to color your conversations. Make sure that your romantic couple, the best friend, and the bully all have something going on in their characters that take them out of the standard molds and gives them some unique dimension of their own. I look forward to seeing where you decide to go with this story. Good luck and keep writing!


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