This is an incredible poem, it has to be one of the best I have read.
You show brutal honesty and a piercing insight into the expectations of society today.
I particularly like the third stanza where you show the story of how the young become corrupted by the perception of what makes a person beautiful. Thus making natural innocence and beauty something which is destroyed.
Well done and keep writing, I will be looking out for more of your fascinating work :)
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