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Review of May You Forget Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is SO emotional!
Thank you for sharing and please check out some of my works...as for improvements...none!

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Review of Heartbreak  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
WOW! This is such a thought provoking and touching story... I can't wait to see more of your works.
For me this work only needs one thing...better paragraphing. A better layout would really emphasize the brilliance of this story.

Thank you for posting and I look forward to more.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very thought provoking and the layout really compliments the whole poem. I can relate to this subject and this poem has really opened my eyes to the ways to express the personal feelings/emotions I have.

Thank you for posting this and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Barnaby
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Review of This Head Is Open  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I love the flow in this poem and the dark content is really thought provoking...good write!

Barnaby
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