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Rated: E | (3.5)
While reading this, I felt more of a sense of confusion than anything else. It seemed to me that this girl had somehow emotionally lost herself on the plane, which caused her to see the people around her through muddied lenses. Your writing while a bit hard to follow, still mimics this girls sense of being lost and not feeling a sense of 'community' with those around her. Overall, I liked how you portrayed her feelings. Just a few spelling mistakes, and that's all. :)
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