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Review of Raven  
Review by Beth Edwards
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow! Now I really want to know what's going to happen with Raven and her daughters. What happened to her partner that fathered her daughters? Who are her parents? How did this overthrow of the capital city go down? I feel that Raven's character is well-developed, and I sense the determination yet hesitation in her as she sets her mind towards freeing her clan and city. Is this to be a novel or a novella? Do you have nay of the chapters up on this site yet? I am looking forward to reading more!
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Review by Beth Edwards
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely poem! I thought for a few minutes it was going to be a full sonnet, but I see that you needed the extra two lines to fully finish your tale. I truly appreciate the perfect iambic pentameter - so many do it wrong! - and your rhymes and true and not forced. I particularly like your plain and simple imagery; it adds a homespun touch. After all, an innkeeper's wife would not be one to use a lot of fancy words and images. Thank you for a wonderful and heartfelt poem!
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Review of Pseudonyms  
Review by Beth Edwards
Rated: E | (5.0)
I so appreciate this information! I have wondered for awhile about the legalities of using a pen name and your article cleared things up. Because it is short and to the point, it was easy to read and understand. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this!
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Review by Beth Edwards
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautiful, touching, and perfect in length. You left enough detail to get your story across but left enough to the imagination so that the reader can make it personal and relate to it. The imagery is so simple and yet so very clear, particularly the visual of walls of shirts, sea of holey socks, and the photos squared on the walls. The meter is well-done, too; not always something easy to accomplish with free verse. Thank you for a wonderfully moving poem.
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