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Review by Michael budd Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It was good but I feel like the ending was a bit underwhelming shouldn't it have more of an ending that fits the stories general direction like maybe the next morning Monzamon sees that they weren't balloons but the digidestined girls who he helps turn back to normal and then they tell him what happened
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