I like this poem. I think it is true with today's society how we judge people with one look. I like the poem I think that it is very good and different from the usual poem about love. I think that you could have used a different term than sick to y stomach or you could have went in depth to and say how it makes you sick to your stomach.
I like this poem. This poem has some good lines that standout as long as some good imagery. I like the line where she says wet lips and damp skin that is some good imagery. I also like the line that says she is my favorite drug which gives the feeling that there are other drugs be she is your absolute favorite
This is a good poem. I think that you could have used more imagery to show how you were feeling down or some examples. I like that the sentence where he says my silent world burst with noise because in my head i can hear it. I also like the sentence where he says she is the center of my eye. I overall like my poem
I like the poem. I enjoyed the use of metaphors. I believe the poem is about someone who has had their heart broken by someone they once loved whether it was a significant other or a family member. The imagery was good i could picture someones heart in a box in the woods. I like the short sentences, and how it quickly got to the point.
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