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Review of March Winds Roar  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Interesting write, but confusing to follow.....not a big fan of how it is written...
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Review of Lest We Forget  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice, short, concise in the point wanting to be made.....I really liked this short piece.....job well done....

As others have told me, I tell you - keep writing, keep writing, keep writing - writing gives us a unique freedom from a variety of things, people and places.

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Review by Billy D Dursens Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice, short and to the point.....

While I am not fond of the freestyle poetry, it made the point you seemed to want to make and that is what counts.

Keep writing, keep writing, keep writing....that is what I was told and it is a very good perspective.

Prayers/Blessings
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Review of Fire and Ice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting use of fire and ice....I like it.

Descriptive, which to me is a must in a poem of nearly any kind (even those of humor).

Don't feel like readers see much Tanka Form at times, so this was refreshing.
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Review of Communication  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Not sure where the title Communication comes in, unless it relates to the two sides of the knife blade.
I do see the line you followed and how some lines can so easily fall in more than one direction.
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Review of Sans Title  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I find this poem interesting in the number of emotions it touches on.
I also find this poem a little confusing as to where it was going, but it does make a point for those who hear voices and fight their inner demons on a regular basis.
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Review by Billy D Dursens Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting....way to use the power of our own insecurities to show how we make judgements on those we think are very different from us.....
At first I felt you left the reader hanging at the end, but in re-reading the last couple of paragraphs I then realized you finished in the best way you could.....
Look forward to reading some of your works again....thanx
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Review of Happy Fourth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Back to ya
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Review of Epiphany  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like....
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Review of Getting Rich  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Sounds like a good rich to me....
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, nice desriptive way of presenting a love being lost.....
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
More along my kind of poetry....ones with a basic count and rhyme.......
I like how you bring the reader along with what appears to be a trip, then zap us into what was a dream.....a dream of hope, the kind of hope you needed when facing such adversity......
With the exception of a couple of lines that almost seemed out of step, very well written....thanx for sharing.
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Review of O God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Leaves me a little hanging at the end.......but you do make a reader think....
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Review of Wet ain't Dead  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Okay, sorry hard to follow...might just be me.....
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reminds me of my grandparents....thanx
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Review by Billy D Dursens Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting....a bit wordy for me, but what do I really know......must have been fun helping grandma with that first email....
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Review by Billy D Dursens Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I felt like I misstepped part way through.....you made some great points to think about.....last bit was a notch out of joint, you lost the ryhme......
Continue to plug on your mind will release itself with the pen....
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Review of Hungry liquor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very strong, very vivid....as a recovering addict (20+ years) I can really feel the sense of helpless in this....thanx.....
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Review of Logic and love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I f you go slow and read the poem it flows very well...I like how this person rights, reminds me alot of some of my poetry....
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Review of Life is a dream?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I always like poetry which sets a pace and makes use of rhyme.
Well done with the flow......
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