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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ellie,

I really enjoy reading your poem.

I get a real sense of the emotion being conveyed and the heartbreak the author feels.

I think the only word that doesn't quite fit with the flow/feel of the poem is "nigh" in the 8th line. Maybe consider replacing this, although this may require you to change both the 7th and 8th lines to fit the rhyming couplet.

Overall a very good poem.
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