Hey there! This is definitely an interesting read and I would love to see more! There were a few grammatical errors in the first paragraph and a long run on sentence in the second, but despite those minuscule flaws, it was good! Good luck on your writing!
I can't say this is my cup of tea in terms of storytelling, yet I still think it was worth my while. A few grammatical errors in the begin and some poor sentences, but I'd say 90% throughout, it was very well done.
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