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Rated: E | (4.5)
One word: awesome. Your friend is totally justified by telling you to put this on here. What is really attractive about this poem is the flow, that and you used the word 'wraiths'. (Huge Lord of the Rings fan here) The only thing I don't like is all the commas used, maybe you could be rid of a few of them (but then again, I am a comma-phobe). Again, great job and thanks for sharing.
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