Nice lyrics! I like the way you begin and ended with a terse on how you felt. You weren't ashamed to spill it out. Even if it were "upset", you expressed yourself. People should be doing more of that in our days. I'm hoping that you feel better now. You never know, everything happens for a reason. Nice lyrics!
I loved your poem! It's great to show how much you care for someone, espeacially the "big" siblings. They couldn't stand you when you were younger, but as you grow, the relationship grows. And you show that that part of life is alive. I loved your diciton, but overall, it was a great poem. Sorry for your loss.
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