Hi! Poet,
It's your another great creation. It is exceptional to us as your entity of patriotism has been seen on a Memorial Day. It is obvious. Every person who loves his nation must feel proud of them who sacrifice their valuable lives for the sake of the people of self-nation. What can be better work than it? So, the poet inspires us to follow them.
It's the best tribute to those sacred souls.
Write on!
Hi! Writer,
Most probably it will be going to be an interesting fantasy novel. Oliver and Sigrun are the main characters. Others will be in the supporting role.
It is a love story. But, from different angle of view. Despite fantasy environment, the lover requested her lady to remain as realistic as possible.
It set in a wood, in ancient days when a preparation for a war was going on. I guess, a psychological war was also parallelly going on.
Overall, there is ready. Now it is time to enjoy the charm of the story.
Hi! Poet,
It's another utility poetry for boosting us for a successful career. We know pretty well that one remembers a failure person. Why should they? There are countless things to remember. But everybody follow a successful person as they also want to be a successful human.
How to be a successful person? First, you set a target to achieve. How will you get it?
This thought process is most vital. Now, you analyze every step. What're the requirements to complete that step successfully? If you try to follow the method, once, you will find you at the finishing point.
But, if you start your journey without proper planning, in a certain point, you will discover yourself in a tremendous difficulty. At last, failure embrace you. You will be very much frustrated.
So, the poet advises you adopt a pre-planned method, if you want to build a successful career.
It is a realistic way to make us successful.
Write on!
Hi! Poet,
It's a nice little but an interesting poem. The teller is the third consecutive generation of the same family, after his father and grandfather, who will be protecting the nation.
It is not only an emotional moment, proud moment, too. Is there more proud moment apart from fight for national interest? Most probably, not. I am fully agreeing with the narrator.
It is a great poem from a true patriot.
Carry on this performance.
Hi! Poet,
It's a brilliant poetry. We can see here the reflection of a unique mentality who doesn't want to give up hope in an adverse situation. He is successful or not, that is not necessary at all. But his fighting spirit, never give up attitude, must set definitely a positive impact on the next generation. It will be the key to their success.
Nevertheless, it is a utility poetry.
Carry on.
Hi! Poet,
It's a brilliant poetry. In our life, we nurture countless dreams. A few of them fulfill, but others don't. We constantly try to fulfill them. Whatever the result may be, success or failure doesn't matter, we immediately set a new goal and start our journey to achieve another one successfully. There's no scope to be over satisfied or frustrated. Concentrate on a new target. This is the recipe of success.
It is indeed a very vital poem.
Your style of writing is simple but very much effective that can easily touch our hearts.
It's a masterpiece.
Carry on the beautiful performance.
Hi! Poet,
It's your another great creation. It is also based on our social needs. We often get impatient to give examinations one after another. When will we get rewards? Many people become mournful. Most probably, God wants to give a sweet gift to you which is your beyond imagination. So poet advises us not to frustrated even on unfavorable days. It's the most valuable advice.
A brilliant and skillful work.
Continue this beautiful poetic run.
Hi! Poet,
Though your poem tiny but I find some definite senses in this poetry. You were searching your soul and saw something in nature. There was a meaning, but that was blurred. That inspired you to search furthermore. Slow but steady wins the race. One day, you must know what the soul really is?
Carry on.
Hi! Poet,
It is a significant poetry for us. You realize what's n the need of the hour. We often see, we hope something but happens another. Failure is the pillar of the success, we know that pretty well. But, the successive failures can make you mourn. It is essential to recover from that unwanted loop. But how? That direction is given in this poetry. So it is so crucial.
We must focus on our goals. So, include certain purposes and urgencies in your life to fulfill those targets. If your steps are proper, you can achieve those. Otherwise you can't. The recipe for getting success is given here by you, the poet.
I hope, you will continue our great works.
Carry on.
Hi! Poet,
It is surely a special poem that tells us two different steps of love.
A real love takes time to build up properly. When two souls connect each other, the true love begins the journey. Some times need for settling.
Once, it starts, it will be a never-ending journey aiming towards the high where God resides.
Carry on.
Hi! Poet,
It is a superb poem of love. It is based on your expressions that tell us much you love him.
You spend a lovely happy. Those days passed away long ago. You feel joy to remembering them. Suppose, it was just yesterday.
Now, another phase of life come at this moment. You both are busy with your work. Even, he goes to another place for doing his duties. But, now your souls make a tight bonding.
Despite the physical distance, you live close to each other. Even you.can listen to each other and feel the presence.
You have all good wishes for him.
It is an ideal love.
Brilliant skills of writing.
Carry on.
Hi! Writer,
It is a well-paced story from you. I enjoy it too much. Hope, the other readers also enjoy it. The main character of the story is none other than Sharon. The entire story is rotating about a trunk, an old and dented trunk. It already looses beauty.
There was a closed drawer. Sharon opened it and found a lot of share certificates. After redeem, she buys a luxurious apartment. So she thanks that old trunk for this unbelievable contributions.
The style of writing is outstanding.
Carry on.
Hi! Writer,
I become mesmerize to see your knowledge of Pokémon. An artistry was there all through your writing. I find a lovely message here. A true love can't be colourless in any circumstance. So, a real love remains alive forever.
You created the romantic scenarios brilliantly with nature.
It is a memorable performance.
Carry on.
Hi! Poet,
It is a nice rhyming poetry. We have a wrong conception of loneliness. We think you are alone means you end. In some extent, it is true, but not for always.
Loneliness gives you the opportunity to empower your creativity.
So, many authors like to live alone to create something special.
Hi! Writer,
I must appreciate your style of thinking. It is indeed very genuine. Every relationship begins with emotions. Everything looks bright and hopeful. We reckon, the world becomes another heaven.
But, except for a few, the situation changes rapidly. That bright heaven becomes more gloomy every day and causes a huge pain in lover's heart. Ultimately, break-up in the relationship takes place, the saddest funeral.
A great artistry performs.
Continue this beauty.
Hi poet,
It's a true story of every life. We dream a lot but fulfill just a few of them. This is reality.
Though you see many dreams, but you know well that most of them are impossible to fulfill. Despite that knowledge, you love to see them. That is the cause of wastage of time unnecessarily.
Luckily, you have some real well-wishers who try wholeheartedly to retrieve you from the abstract world of imagination. Many don't have this opportunity. Not easily but come back to normal life-style. Utilize it wisely.
I like how you give some important advice.
Carry on.
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