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Review of Morning Sunlight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem very much. The positivity comes through in that looking at the brand new day is indeed a new start, every day. The only thing I might change is the last verses... the rhythm seems a little off. Perhaps something like, "Whisper your dreams, Its arms are wide open, Feel the sun as it gleams."
Just a suggestion. (But I'm no expert).

I enjoyed this poem and thank you for sharing it.
Write on!

Cathy
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Review of Thinking of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem. It flows smoothly, and gives a happy tone, even through tears, and even though it is implied that the relationship did not continue for some reason, be it through unrequited love or death... I guess you leave it up to the interpretation of the reader.

I'll just say that I can definitely relate... I am 42 and still have fond memories that I don't want to let go of from when I was 16 (puppy love).

I especially like the ending... "to be uncovered again someday, when I am thinking of you." To me this says that love never dies, nor should it.

Thanks for sharing, and keep on writing!
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