This poem speaks the truth! I know that I'm also guilty of inturrupting but I do try to listen.
My favorite lines are:
Maybe we import the me
and minimize the you.
I love this. When i was reading this I couldn't help but think of my grandma, even though she died 5 years ago. I know how hard it is to lose someone and who the pain never really goes away. I could feel the emotion in the poem and think it is really good. Keep up the good work.
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