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Review of Gay Marriage  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really dont get what peolpe are on about with this. The saying 'Love is blind' is what i go by. If love overcomes race, why not gender? Of course, maybe you shouldn't be asking a lesbian... :)
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
the pain developed as a child carrys through all time. you learn to fear it then, and you fear it forever. it is the danger of the learning process of a child.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
here's the remarkable thing i learned from watching children, and ecspecially teenagers:
Some things leave scars, some just go away.
the moment they get up, they run off and play.
sorry for the poetry thing. bad timing for writing inspirations, huh? but really, some things that shouldn't hurt much hurt so terribly. and things that should tear you apart, are just blown off like nothing has happened. i wish i had that. it would make life so easy.
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Review of Last Thoughts  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
wow. love the bold, really makes it stand out. if its not about you, than why write it? when i write, it is to express myself, my problems, my needs, my ideas. i thought everyone does that.
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Review of Separation  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, having experienced heartbre4ak, i would say that is a watered down version of it. but i get your point. now what is this about help?
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Review of It's He  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
odd. no offense, though. you trust him. you love him, to an extent. keep him. you may never have anyone like him again. as stupid as it is, play it safe. you will thank me for it.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
good expression of pain. i feel for u.
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Review of My choices  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
u have so many choices, so many questions. But no decisions, no answers.
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Review of Letter To Myself  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
these thoughts come from ur mind, don't they? they also come from u. ur mind can only answer what u know.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
one thing effects another until they all become one
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Review of Pushed Too Far  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
it is hard being bullied and i think Ty did the only thing he could to try and stop it. i don't know how principals stay in middle schools either. i think they stay because, underneath all the anger they may seem to have for you, they enjoy being around students and helping them learn.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
words r not needed to make somehting beautiful. no words to that girl's song just makes it all the more loved and unique. by the way, writings can't write it all, but that doesn't mean they can't try. :)
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Everything u do effects somone else. but that's not ur fault. i can't tell u the answer to the choices, but i can tell u that, even though it effects others, it is still ur choice to make. it is still ur life to end or continue.
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Review of pity party  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is very interesting.

Oh we shall never be lonely again.

Does that mean you and the person, or is the person thalking like there is a voice in her head?
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Review of Dream of Death  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
death is a release sometimes. think about it that way, and it won't scare you so much anymore.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i like your outright passion. it is ok to be in pain, ok to be in love.the pain will teach u, the love will release u from the pain u have endured. tyr to love, even if it hurts, because it will one day be worth it.
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Review of Change  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
so true. but know this:
"There is nothing to fix when there is nothing broken."
Just because you are not fine, doesn't mean you want someone to help. i didn't, still dont'. poeple don't know how to help, and usually make it worse.
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Review of What is life?  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
my addition:

What is life?

a meaning.
a chance to change something, create something to help those after us.
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Review of I Miss You  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like i said, we all make mistakes. you can be sorry, then you can move on to those who are still left to u. it is hard to move on, i know. but ustill have a life to live, so i suggest u live it.
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Review of Black Dog  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I cannot say i can help u, but i can say i understand your pain. i have pain too.
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Review of Pretend  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Some things are not meant to last forever. Some things we don't want to remember, due to the pain of a memory at the edges of the mind: they are gone, they may not come back.
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Review of I'll die trying  Open in new Window.
Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
the pain of lost love can kill u. keep trying.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i enjoy your truthfulness. i would like it if you emailed me, so we could talk. mine is booky@Writing.Com.
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
i'm bisexual. Do u know that my parents would kill me for that! Tell people u feel u can trust, because some people will go to any lengths to deny the truth. i told my sister a few weeks ago, and she says it's just a phase. i'm a girl with an ex-girlfriend! How is that a phase!?
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Review by Sherry M. Kent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is kinda scary. And deep. it makes u think. thank u for making me think about life and death.
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