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Review of Please let me be  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
unrequited love whether you're 16 or 60 sucks *Smile*

you have a solid rhyme scheme, almost lyrical. try writing about things which aren't so cliched. you have a great deal of talent.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely, forlorn.

Line 12 - bound should be present tense bind
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Review of Apocalypse Come  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
one small spelling mishap, peaked should be peeked. good luck!!
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