Braunwyn's (braunwyn) Reviews

Braunwyn

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17 Public Reviews Given

23 Total Reviews Given

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#3238639

Review of The God of His World

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

This is a GREAT story! I am not really into fantasy type stories but this kept me reading!!

I am going to save you as a favorite author so I can continue to read what you post. I am VERY impressed by your writing style and your work!
Thanks for an EXCELLENT read! Write On!!!

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#3238636

Review of Sandman Waits

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

WOW! This is REALLY good! I think the only thing I would do is take out the following:

And then you may
Remember the time
When I had told you
This helpful rhyme.

It is the only part that I don't see that fits the rest very well.

KEEP WRITING! GREAT GREAT work!!!!!!

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#3237350

Review of Parasitical Bureaucracy

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

GREAT prologue - sets the stage for who you character is and why. I look forward to reading more!

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#3236308

Review of How to dance.

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Great job on this. I like your creativity! Keep on writing!

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#3236076

Review of GRANDPA'S WATCH

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: E

| (4.5)

WOW! This made me feel really good reading this! It is always the little things that matter - we all need to remember this when it comes to our loved ones. I love the way you put your feelings into words at the end.
Thanks for a GREAT read!

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#3234512

Review of The Forgotten Generation

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This is a very sad poem with so much truth. It is unfortunate that some people follow the same path they grew up in - the abused becomes the abuser and so on....
We must all learn to keep our eyes and ears opened and not be afraid to get involved.
Thanks for the great poem.

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#3234291

Review of ~~The Retriever's Guardian~~ Ch. 1+2

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Oh My Gosh!!!! this is AMAZING!!! I have never been one to read this type of story but, I have to tell you, I couldn't STOP - it was SO interesting!!!
I love the characters and the fact that a woman is a part of a group that was once for men only in the past (being a woman myself lol). Your details of each character made it easy for me to visualize since I am not accustomed to this type of story. I cannot wait to read the next chapters!
Thanks for a GREAT read!

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#3230709

Review of Pondering Thoughts

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: E

| (4.0)

THANKS for a GREAT read! You have some VERY deep thoughts here. I like the way it flows. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!

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#3229835

Review of Hunting Season

Review by Braunwyn

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I LOVED this story! It was interesting, funny, and oh so familiar! In this day and age of technology we definitely need more outlets!
Thank you for a wonderful, enjoyable read! I hope to see more from you. Keep writing!