This is a good poem. It brings out emotion and I can understand how much the scars are worse then the cutting itself. This is lovely and I do hope to read more of your wok soon.
This is a very good poem. I think the emotion comes out strongly in the begginning. There is nothing really I would change about this poem. Keep up the good work =]
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